TKnC is always happy to welcome back old friends. This time we get double the pleasure with Graham Smith and a character from his previously published 'Shooting Stars' in...
Star Struck Shooter
She’d escaped the bullet I’d fired at her. Now my moral code wouldn’t
let me kill her myself. I allowed myself one bullet per target and I’d missed
when I shot at her. I’d killed a bystander, which further breached my
professional ethics. An assassin shouldn’t feel remorse but I hated that I’d
killed an innocent. At least it was one of those bloody mime artists.
I had a solution though. I’d merely stepped up my apprentice’s training
and passed the job to him. I’d broken my code over that bitch once. I’d sooner
die than break my code a second time for the same target.
Jessica wouldn’t escape this time. We’d make sure of that. We’d followed
her to the beach house where she was relaxing between movies.
I knew her routine very well after the idyllic month we’d shared here.
There were no bodyguards, assistants or staff. She went native in every
respect. Cooked her own food, did her own laundry and refused contact with
anyone who wasn’t invited onto her island.
We’d arrived late the night before, rowing the last mile to be sure of
silence. Out here sound didn’t just carry over the water it amplified. A cough
became a gunshot, a gunshot a thunderclap and all because of the night air’s
papal purity.
Soon she’d be going for her morning jog. Twice round the two mile
perimeter, running at the waters edge where the sand was firmer.
The plan was simple, the apprentice would wait until she was nearly
finished her second lap. She would be breathless, sweaty and low on energy as
she always drove herself to near exhaustion when exercising.
Then he would sprint out from the mango grove, grab her and then drown
her in the shallow breakers rolling in from the east. Her body would be left at
the high tide mark to be found by the locals who brought her daily provisions
at noon.
As she rounded the southerly point for the second time I reached across
to the apprentice and gently tapped him on the shoulder to get his attention
without startling him.
I pointed out a pleasure yacht which had just hove into view from behind
the neighbouring island.
The younger man relaxed back from his sprinters crouch and lifted his
thumb from his fist to show his understanding. We would fall back to the first
of our reserve plans.
I’d been on enough missions to know never to rely on just one plan. The
second plan was almost as straightforward although there was more risk to it.
We would wait on her reaching the house. I knew she would go straight for a
shower and that would be his chance to pounce.
OK so it couldn’t be passed off
as an accident like drowning but she would still die and that was all I cared
about.
She ran past us. Dressed in baggy shorts and t-shirt, hair matted to her
head, face and clothes drenched in sweat as she puffed her way, red faced past
our hiding place among the trees. No wonder she was the highest paid actress in
the world, even in the bedraggled state she had presented as she ran by, she
was still eye wateringly beautiful.
Giving her a hundred yards head start, we jogged through the woods until
she entered the house. The yacht had passed the island and was arrowing its way
through the calm seas.
I entered the house via the sliding windows which fronted the beach. My
apprentice was hot on my heels with the knife ready in his gloved hand. I led
him through the house to the bathroom which adjoined the master bedroom. We
could hear running water. I signalled to my apprentice to go in.
After adjusting his grip on the knife he burst through the door and
slashed and stabbed at the figure in the open shower cubicle. In my mind I
could hear the screeching wheek from the classic Hitchcock film. I kicked my
attention back towards what was happening in the bathroom only to see a female
body fall to the floor.
We made our getaway that night. Our dingy easily covered the five miles
to the nearby island where we’d set up our base. After cleaning everything down
which may have held a trace of us we boarded the plane back to Miami.
I was on cloud nine. I‘d hated her ever since she’d told an entire table
in a crowded L.A. restaurant of my erectile dysfunction.
It had taken years for me to perfect my assassins’ craft, and make
enough money to stalk her around the globe until I finally had my chance. Now
however, she was dead. My apprentice
came good and killed for me. I would always remember him favourably for the way
he unquestioningly settled the score my code wouldn’t allow me to.
As we exited Miami International Airport I bought a newspaper to see if
her death had yet been discovered.
Right there on the front page was her picture, underneath the chastising
headline “Movie Star’s Twin Found Slain”.
© Graham Smith 2012
BIO:
Graham Smith is married with a young son. A time served joiner he has built bridges, houses, dug drains and slated roofs to make ends meet. For the last eleven years he has been manager of a busy hotel and wedding venue near Gretna Green , Scotland .
An avid fan of crime fiction since being given one of Enid Blyton’s Famous Five books at the age of eight, he has also been a regular reviewer for the well respected review site Crimesquad.com for over two years.
As well as reviewing for Crimesquad.com Graham has also interviewed such stellar names as David Baldacci, Jeffrey Deaver, Dennis Lehane, Lee Child, Matt Hilton, current CWA Chair Peter James, Mark Billingham and many others.
When not working, his time is spent reading, writing and playing games with his son. He enjoys socialising and spending time with friends and family.
Love the process as it's explained here. The code, the principal... the reason why he hated her. All leading up to that perfect twist. Fine writing, Graham. Really enjoyed this.
ReplyDeleteThank you very much Lily and thank you for having me over again.
ReplyDeleteI just love it when a plan comes togeth . . . aw Hell! So, now they have to go get a third guy? I can just hear Maxwell Smart snapping his fingers, "Missed it by that much!" Cool story, mate. I know it ain't funny . . . but I still laughed.
ReplyDeleteOh My!! Was not prepared for that ending!! Excellent though!!!!
ReplyDeleteAj, you're right about their being another assassin to follow. I'm already dreaming the plot up and I'll be putting it down sometime soon.
ReplyDeleteThanks for your comments mate, if I can make you laugh then I'm happy.
Arlene, thank you. I'm glad I caught you out with the twist though.
I remember the first story and this is a good follow-on. Well written and darkly funny ... great last line. I suspect the apprentice is for the chop (literally) now. I look forward to the next 'episode.'
ReplyDeleteCheers!
Keith Gingell
Thanks Keith, I'm glad you enjoyed part 2. Part 3 is starting to take shape in my mind.
ReplyDeleteHi Graham
ReplyDeleteTerrific!!! Well Written ;-)