A J Humpage terrifies me - on a regular basis, or at least her incredible fiction does. Her Halloween Horror offering, Gabriel's Reflection captured all the TK'n'C editors' imaginations and made it to first runner-up position in this year's competition.
AJ has an uncanny way of touching our vulnerable spots, feeding our fears and making us face reality. Human horror or supernatural; Gabriel's Reflection will leave you asking questions.
GABRIEL'S REFLECTION by A J Humpage
Droplets splashed onto Gabe’s alabaster face and raced down his cheek, but he couldn’t feel it; he couldn’t feel the coolness against his skin. The rain drummed softly against his torso, muffled against his soaked shirt.
Bio: A J Humpage has short stories and poetry published in anthologies like 6 Sentences, Pill Hill Press, Static Movement and many e-zines. She dispenses writing advice at http://allwritefictionadvice.blogspot.com and is on Twitter: @AJHumpage
Her first novel, Blood of the Father, is available on Amazon Kindle.
AJ has an uncanny way of touching our vulnerable spots, feeding our fears and making us face reality. Human horror or supernatural; Gabriel's Reflection will leave you asking questions.
GABRIEL'S REFLECTION by A J Humpage
The last ribbons
of sunlight dipped behind the trees in the distance, winked with sensual allure
between twisted, gnarled branches lining the roadside and reflected across
Gabriel Henshaw’s worn face.
He kept a steady
hand on the steering wheel and speed dialled his wife.
The road ahead
stretched far into the distance. Wheat fields to his left wavered in
the breeze and seemed to beckon the approaching darkness. To his right, a raft
of bright yellow rape soaked up the remaining shards of sunlight.
The line rang
out.
Gabe always rang
to let Amy know if he was running late from work because she didn’t like to
start dinner without him.
‘Hey,’ he said,
when she answered. ‘Sorry love, the meeting overran. I’m on my way
home.
‘That’s
okay. I’m just starting dinner,’ she said.
‘I’ll be twenty
minutes, max.’
‘Good, I’ll
have a glass of red waiting for you.’
He smiled, popped
the phone back in his pocket. A rusty hue crept across his face and
coloured his eyes; the last of the sunlight inked the sky, which had darkened
considerably in the few moments he’d been talking to his wife, and now a deep
unearthly red tint pressed against the landscape. Fresh air grazed
his skin through the open window.
Up ahead,
Gabe noticed a car parked near the verge, the hood up. Normally he would have
stopped to help, but he was overly late and he just wanted to get home to
Amy.
He noticed the
car was a Range Rover, like his own car. He peered at the figure hunched over
the engine, caught a glimpse of a man dressed in a smart dark suit, although he
couldn’t make out the driver’s
features.
Gabe didn’t stop
and continued driving.
He pondered the
speed of the fading light, flicked the headlights on.
Coiled, eerie
shapes of trees drifted in and out of view as the lights grazed across them,
while the grey-tinted road slowly unravelled before him.
He’d never known
the darkness to descend so quickly, especially when not more than ten minutes
ago the sun had brightened the landscape.
He eased down on
his speed. The road ahead
curved.
Gabe knew the
roads well; he travelled along them every day to and from work. He knew each
bend, each dip and incline, and yet the encroaching darkness seemed to make
them appear quite different from daylight and he failed to recognise the road
ahead. It curved into a sharp bend before eventually
straightening. Large trees on either side of the road formed an
enclosed, narrow space.
He felt the
fractious trickle of adrenaline in his guts, didn’t recognise this stretch of
road.
The tree-lined
avenue continued for some time until the car eventually emerged from the cover
of the trees. The darkness seemed heavier now and pressed against the windows,
the hint of light all but gone in the space of a few minutes. He must have
made a wrong turn somewhere.
He pulled over,
stopped the car and retrieved the phone from his shirt pocket. He flicked
through the call log. He’d made the call to his wife at 8.05pm. He glanced at
the time on the dashboard.
It was 8.10pm.
An earthy,
deciduous scent laced the air. Darkness pressed against him, eager and
intrusive, and from somewhere he heard the hum of an approaching car.
He looked in the
rear view mirror, saw lights in the distance. They grew brighter as they edged
closer, at speed. Gabe recognised the shape - a Range Rover like the
one he’d seen moments earlier by the roadside.
His eyes
twitched. The lights grazed across the inside of the car, blurred
his vision. Then passed. He watched as the car raced ahead into the
distance.
Curious, he tried
following the Range Rover, but it easily accelerated away from him and vanished
into the thickening
maw.
A spot of rain
spattered against the windscreen, distracted him. Then another. And
another.
The rain came fast
then, grew heavier and blurred into one to warp the windscreen into a
shimmering vision, like heat rising.
He switched on
the windscreen wipers, raced through the gloom, until distorted, coloured
reflections broke through the darkness ahead of him and he hit the brakes.
It was the Range
Rover.
Adrenaline
squirted into his stomach; apprehension raced up his throat, but he tried to
push it back into the pit of his stomach.
The large 4 x 4
pulled away again, continued forward at a steady pace, as though teasing
Gabe.
He then noticed
the license plate. He blinked as though caught in a momentary camera flash;
eyes dilated as though soaking up the blackness around him.
Skin drained to
white.
He had not
imagined it. Couldn’t believe it.
The car in front
had the same license plate as Gabe’s car.
He stared in
strained disbelief. He followed the car until it reached an intersection. After
a momentary pause, the car moved forward and turned completely around so that
it was facing Gabe.
Through his rain
streaked windscreen he saw the contours of a face appearing through the dark,
glaring back at him.
Gabe watched;
skin pulsed. He reached for his phone.
The car
approached. The driver faced Gabe. Smiled. But
it was humourless and black and forged with a demented sheen.
Gabe dropped the
phone, felt his insides spasm. The man in the Range Rover had the same dark
eyes, same expression, same square jaw line and same dark hair as Gabe.
Same car, same
clothes. Same face. Everything, the same.
A reflection.
Gabe was staring
at himself.
His heart
stuttered. Stomach and guts contracted, almost pushing the fear through his
anus. ‘Christ...’
The black car
vanished into the burgeoning darkness, curtained by the rain.
He leaned
forward, found the phone and dialled his wife. His mouth felt like the bottom
of a sandpit. ‘Amy, you won’t believe what just happened to
me. I just seen myself, I swear to God, it was me.’
‘Gabe, what are you talking about?’
‘I just saw myself driving my car, it was me,
and he smiled right at me. I swear to God.’
‘Gabe, calm down. What exactly do you
mean?’
‘I saw me. Driving my car,
like a reflection, only it wasn’t a reflection, he was real, solid.’
Amy’s voice
sounded rational in his ear. ‘You sound tired,
Gabe.’
‘But it was me. I
saw me.’
‘You think you did,’ she said. ‘The mind plays
tricks when we’re tired. You probably saw someone who looks almost like you.’
‘But I know what I saw. The car had the exact
same license plate. Explain that.’
‘It sounds like you’ve had a tiring day. Sometimes
we see things that aren’t there.’
A
pause. Then, ‘He was a doppelganger. That’s supposed to be a bad
omen isn’t it? I mean really bad...’
‘You don’t
believe that rubbish do you? It was someone who looks a bit like
you. Now calm down, okay? Tell me all about it when you get home.
Just relax and drive carefully.’
Her words drifted
into the sullen silence. ‘Okay...’ He hung up, sat quite still for a
moment, contemplated what he’d seen, or thought he’d
seen. Maybe Amy was right, he was tired, perhaps his mind was
mocking him with insolent concision.
He breathed deep,
glanced at the road sign to his left, just visible through the murk. His
expression drooped. He saw that he was not lost at all, but merely
two miles from home.
Frustrated, he
accelerated away into the darkness.
* * *
Ochre
streetlights highlighted the rain.
He slipped the
key into the lock, opened the front door. He stepped inside. Shadows
instantly retreated.
Dinner smelled
good.
He closed the
door. Slow footsteps crept across the tiled floor. His shadow slithered into
the kitchen.
Amy turned from
the counter. ‘There’s a glass of wine on the counter. You Okay? You sounded so
anxious on the phone. You must have seen someone who was the
spitting image of you.’
‘I did.’ He lifted the wine glass,
sniffed the aroma.
‘Dinner won’t be long, then you can tell me
all about it,’ she said, turning back to the julienne carrots. ‘We all have
someone that looks like us, so don’t worry about that urban myth about seeing
your doppelganger. Honestly, Gabe, don’t believe that mumbo jumbo.’
‘You don’t believe it’s true?’ he asked, voice
strangely detached.
‘No, seeing your double doesn’t mean you die,
Gabe.’
He moved across
the kitchen towards her. Silent. Like a malignant shadow oozing from the fabric
of the umbra.
He stopped at the
knife stand, lifted the fillet knife. ‘No more working late for
me...’
She chided away
his words, didn’t look up. ‘You always say that.’
‘I mean it. It’s time for a change.’ He edged
closer to her, sniffed her scent and touched her waist. He dropped
his voice to a barely audible rasp. ‘I’ve waited a long time for this. A
very long time. And now I want enjoy my new life.’
She half
turned. ‘What new life?’
His eyes
solidified. ‘The one your husband gave to me.’
‘What, I-’
The blade found
its way under her jaw and sliced through her skin and oesophagus in a clean,
hard, powerful thrust. A raspy gasp of air rattled from deep within
her lungs, drowned in the velvety blood spilling from the gash like an overflowing
cup.
Amy’s blood
warmed his fingers as she dribbled. Her pulse pumped hard beneath
her skin, veins swelled and slithered with panic.
She struggled in
his grip, but then wilted quickly against his strength.
He pushed down on
the blade and sawed through muscle and tendon. Her eyes rolled in her sockets
as pain scratched across her nerves; mouth contorted and rippled in a silent
scream, arms dangled, limp.
The blade reached
her spine, rubbed against the bone. He pulled her partially severed
head from her shoulders, tore the skin.
She twitched in
his arms, mouth moved with invisible words. Frightened eyes still
moved.
He smiled at her,
but it was an empty, emotionless gesture. He let go and she dropped
to the floor, her head flopping down across her chest by a thin sliver of
muscle.
She watched her
blood spill across the floor, then saw him admire his reflection in the window.
He removed his
blood sodden coat, straightened his tie and then left the kitchen before the
finality of her blackness descended.
* * *
Droplets splashed onto Gabe’s alabaster face and raced down his cheek, but he couldn’t feel it; he couldn’t feel the coolness against his skin. The rain drummed softly against his torso, muffled against his soaked shirt.
A flash of light
brightened the scene momentarily. A wrecked car; mangled metal wrapped around a
tree stump, windows shattered. Thunder rolled through churning clouds.
Another flash.
Gabe had no
recollection of slewing the car across the road and colliding with the tree,
nor the tremendous force that had punctured his head.
The only thing he
knew right then was the raw, stricken fear clawing at him. He had reached up,
felt the strange shape of his skull. He realised with frightening clarity that
the force of impact had partially smashed his head and now he cradled the
remains of his brain as the minutes of oblivion approached.
He felt a
peculiar kind of warmth inch across his chest and shoulders, didn’t know what
it was, he couldn’t see.
He wanted to
scream, but couldn’t. He wanted to stop his blood spilling out across the road,
but couldn’t. The rain smothered his last moments.
And despite his
shattered head, his only thought was of the man he’d seen: Himself.
Another flash
ripped across the landscape. The clouds rumbled.
Gabe realised
then, just before the blackness came, what the terrible omen of seeing his
double truly meant. His wife had been wrong. Everyone had
a doppelganger. A true reflection. Gabe had seen his.
And death always followed.
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Bio: A J Humpage has short stories and poetry published in anthologies like 6 Sentences, Pill Hill Press, Static Movement and many e-zines. She dispenses writing advice at http://allwritefictionadvice.blogspot.com and is on Twitter: @AJHumpage
Her first novel, Blood of the Father, is available on Amazon Kindle.
Gruesome and poetic. This had a very cinematic feel to it. It reminded me of "Reflection of Death" from the Amicus film Tales from the Crypt mixed with 'The Man Who Haunted Himself'.
ReplyDeleteI love both those films and find Doppelgängers an unnerving menace in a horror. This story found that same level of tension. A great read and a nice set up for Halloween. Thanks.
You got me looking over my shoulder as I'm reading. Great job of slowly building suspense through changes in the weather and Gabe's growing paranoia. The violence in the kitchen was shocking. You rattled my nerves. Nicely done, AJ.
ReplyDeletesuperb writing, superb horror, thanks, AJ!
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