tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3733545996388457449.post7931194798213941322..comments2024-03-05T16:43:58.548+00:00Comments on Thrillers, Killers 'n' Chillers: DRESSMAKING by Rebecca SwanAuthorhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/12033131935968488175noreply@blogger.comBlogger9125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3733545996388457449.post-17199676756379663822013-02-10T22:47:49.375+00:002013-02-10T22:47:49.375+00:00Hi Rebecca ;-)
I enjoyed this chilling piece Ve...Hi Rebecca ;-)<br /><br /><br />I enjoyed this chilling piece Very, very much.<br /><br />Thank you for sharing ;-)susiehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02775539900465637853noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3733545996388457449.post-16588950801567351612009-12-05T10:06:29.936+00:002009-12-05T10:06:29.936+00:00Thanks for your comments everyone,
Regards, Rebe...Thanks for your comments everyone, <br /><br />Regards, RebeccaRebecca Swannoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3733545996388457449.post-69431391269199261632009-12-02T20:40:47.735+00:002009-12-02T20:40:47.735+00:00Nice spooky tale. Can't really add anything t...Nice spooky tale. Can't really add anything that hasn't been said above. Good work and keep it up.<br />Regards, David.David Barberhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05006533626998905560noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3733545996388457449.post-22527236149667421612009-12-01T15:54:18.856+00:002009-12-01T15:54:18.856+00:00Spooky! I liked the old-fashioned ghost story vibe...Spooky! I liked the old-fashioned ghost story vibe. It made me wonder when the story is set - at times it seems almost Victorian, but the characters occasionally use more modern-day terms.Gavin Bellnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3733545996388457449.post-6614496186888526382009-11-30T22:22:39.187+00:002009-11-30T22:22:39.187+00:00Congrats. Top tale.Congrats. Top tale.Paul D Brazillhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12881642426845398389noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3733545996388457449.post-35421288969283246502009-11-30T19:50:23.841+00:002009-11-30T19:50:23.841+00:00Hi Beccy,I already gave you my feedback by email, ...Hi Beccy,I already gave you my feedback by email, so I hope the comments above help. Good work, by the way (and I hope you're happy with the little cut I did?)Authorhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12033131935968488175noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3733545996388457449.post-78034914549199534632009-11-30T18:52:30.712+00:002009-11-30T18:52:30.712+00:00I really enjoyed this. It was different, spooky an...I really enjoyed this. It was different, spooky and amusing. You described the house so well, I want to visit it! <br /><br />I was a little concerned about the character turning her 'glassy eyes' towards the armoire, and I'm not sure that anyone really would say "We need to leave, as a matter of urgency" especially to a partner. But I thought it was very well written and I was drawn in immediately. More please!Lily Childshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15861288507716873813noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3733545996388457449.post-67745474728777655012009-11-30T03:59:01.929+00:002009-11-30T03:59:01.929+00:00I really liked it, so much that I read it twice! T...I really liked it, so much that I read it twice! The writing style is very good, especially for the type of story and the periods it evokes (1920's). It really has me wondering about the ending!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3733545996388457449.post-40180071069349308822009-11-29T15:20:56.243+00:002009-11-29T15:20:56.243+00:00Hiya Becky,
An eerie tale, well told. Some beautif...Hiya Becky,<br />An eerie tale, well told. Some beautiful descriptive writing here.<br />Just be aware of cliches creeping in (e.g. 'pregnant pause' - 'figment of my imagination') and try to think of other ways to say it.<br />That apart, a fine atmospheric story.<br />regards,<br />ColAnonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17913040012695421077noreply@blogger.com