tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3733545996388457449.post7699664798507209252..comments2024-03-05T16:43:58.548+00:00Comments on Thrillers, Killers 'n' Chillers: THE LAST CIGARETTE By Chad EagletonAuthorhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/12033131935968488175noreply@blogger.comBlogger16125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3733545996388457449.post-33562057898488209482010-08-20T20:10:46.866+01:002010-08-20T20:10:46.866+01:00Great, classic dialogue.Great, classic dialogue.Paul D Brazillhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12881642426845398389noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3733545996388457449.post-51609163952236418082010-08-09T11:40:34.361+01:002010-08-09T11:40:34.361+01:00Much enjoyed that one, Chad. Well worth reading t...Much enjoyed that one, Chad. Well worth reading this early in the morning.Christopher Pimentalhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09425426301377689603noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3733545996388457449.post-11386804746375898402010-08-07T01:58:27.404+01:002010-08-07T01:58:27.404+01:00You know, I caught Background to Danger on TCM not...You know, I caught <a href="http://www.imdb.com/title/tt0035659/" rel="nofollow">Background to Danger</a> on TCM not too long ago. Despite that reuniting of Peter Lorre and Sydney Greenstreet, and a screenplay by W.R. Burnett, I dug your story twice as much.Cormac Brownhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02990698766444728760noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3733545996388457449.post-24688359690613926482010-08-06T15:57:24.536+01:002010-08-06T15:57:24.536+01:00Chad,
What I always love about your stories is th...Chad,<br /><br />What I always love about your stories is that the knife comes out when the reader least expects it.<br /><br />I kept thinking that there was no way that Elzey was going do in Mifflin, even when he was paying no attention at all to his surroundings.<br /><br />And then...snikt! to quote sound effects from Wolverine comics.<br /><br />Extremely gratifying story.<br /><br />I'll interlude it over at ATON later today.Christopher Granthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11581243409967241320noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3733545996388457449.post-46371369922097838662010-08-05T02:16:28.308+01:002010-08-05T02:16:28.308+01:00Great dialogue, flow and delivery. A finely crafte...Great dialogue, flow and delivery. A finely crafted piece.Michael Solenderhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01120045114297450520noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3733545996388457449.post-29910822926250961942010-08-04T23:10:32.736+01:002010-08-04T23:10:32.736+01:00Hard nosed and gritty! An excellent read - just gl...Hard nosed and gritty! An excellent read - just glad I've never smoked!SueHhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11394307650434614637noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3733545996388457449.post-48830164935802299922010-08-04T18:05:12.165+01:002010-08-04T18:05:12.165+01:00Damn good flow...no dry spots, no floundering.
Ni...Damn good flow...no dry spots, no floundering.<br /><br />Nice job.Mike Wilkersonhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00771502395254223219noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3733545996388457449.post-39815299994463776332010-08-04T15:29:52.255+01:002010-08-04T15:29:52.255+01:00Badass, as always. In fact, if you weren't so ...Badass, as always. In fact, if you weren't so awesome, I might come off as biased.Rubi KayĆbihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15620274980815608061noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3733545996388457449.post-22960199130824526872010-08-04T10:38:29.602+01:002010-08-04T10:38:29.602+01:00I echo all the other comments; great dialogue and ...I echo all the other comments; great dialogue and atmosphere. Super stuff Chad.Alan Griffithshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12890190137499272096noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3733545996388457449.post-5621326026936969142010-08-04T02:47:19.762+01:002010-08-04T02:47:19.762+01:00Well done, sir.Well done, sir.David Cranmerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04749857752139212888noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3733545996388457449.post-54644912110444848172010-08-04T02:06:24.354+01:002010-08-04T02:06:24.354+01:00Really great use of dialog. Not a wasted word.Really great use of dialog. Not a wasted word.pattinase (abbott)https://www.blogger.com/profile/02916037185235335846noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3733545996388457449.post-70352722128115827352010-08-04T01:41:28.738+01:002010-08-04T01:41:28.738+01:00The polished shoes shining in the dark will stick ...The polished shoes shining in the dark will stick with me for a long time. This is rough, mean spirited and nasty stuff. In other words: it's bitchin! Thanks for puttin' this one out there, bro. Enjoyed it a lot.AJ Hayesnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3733545996388457449.post-4800339643557170112010-08-04T00:23:26.704+01:002010-08-04T00:23:26.704+01:00I didn't enjoy my last cigarette either.I didn't enjoy my last cigarette either.Unknownhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18288398379536097109noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3733545996388457449.post-59461191098171113552010-08-04T00:15:54.253+01:002010-08-04T00:15:54.253+01:00really liked your dialogue in the coffee scene. r...really liked your dialogue in the coffee scene. real sharp and snappy. you may have a character to revisit on your hands. how about going back to his early days, show him learning the ropes? thanks.Nigel Birdhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05529578665251906089noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3733545996388457449.post-36059058005200318422010-08-03T21:19:54.311+01:002010-08-03T21:19:54.311+01:00I'm still not quitting smoking.I'm still not quitting smoking.Jimmy Callawayhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13725548493403210066noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3733545996388457449.post-63266782824651950012010-08-03T21:19:19.956+01:002010-08-03T21:19:19.956+01:00Cool story. Have not smoked--cigs at least ;) in a...Cool story. Have not smoked--cigs at least ;) in a long time, and now I remember why.Sean Patrick Reardonhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14051252366031997054noreply@blogger.com