tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3733545996388457449.post2987123461833736248..comments2024-03-05T16:43:58.548+00:00Comments on Thrillers, Killers 'n' Chillers: THAT MORNING IN THE MARSH by Phil Beloin Jr.Authorhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/12033131935968488175noreply@blogger.comBlogger6125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3733545996388457449.post-6832517645038774562011-08-27T03:11:18.161+01:002011-08-27T03:11:18.161+01:00I like the speed of the twist. If it had been dela...I like the speed of the twist. If it had been delayed or "built up" to more it would tipped your hand. Way it is, perfect comes to mind. Caught that obnoxious age group exactly. Cool. AJAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3733545996388457449.post-68603499127937005992011-08-26T17:18:54.248+01:002011-08-26T17:18:54.248+01:00Interesting and a very good read.Interesting and a very good read.Reggiehttp://reggiesblogspotrantings.blogspot.com/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3733545996388457449.post-44891045647918384662011-08-25T18:57:30.886+01:002011-08-25T18:57:30.886+01:00Personally, I enjoyed how the story flipped around...Personally, I enjoyed how the story flipped around so quickly at the end. Different strokes for different folks, I guess.<br /><br />Great tale Phil, and you captured the boys' arrogance perfectly.Lily Childshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15861288507716873813noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3733545996388457449.post-63826527582907142742011-08-25T15:36:20.298+01:002011-08-25T15:36:20.298+01:00Enjoyed that Phil, as always.Enjoyed that Phil, as always.Sean Patrick Reardonhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14051252366031997054noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3733545996388457449.post-50955141240955966112011-08-24T15:22:48.495+01:002011-08-24T15:22:48.495+01:00I liked it, but agree with Daniel - you broke your...I liked it, but agree with Daniel - you broke your pacing at the end, trying to "wrap it up."<br /><br />That said, the dialogue had a really natural feel to it, and the story itself had a great progression.Chris Alliniottehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04094925215735680849noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3733545996388457449.post-17305069165598560542011-08-24T13:16:23.724+01:002011-08-24T13:16:23.724+01:00I thought the kids had good dialogue, but the endi...I thought the kids had good dialogue, but the ending was too abrupt for me. I wished it had dragged on a bit.James Aragonhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04041781054970545018noreply@blogger.com