tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3733545996388457449.post1814595019548186258..comments2024-03-05T16:43:58.548+00:00Comments on Thrillers, Killers 'n' Chillers: ON THE RUN by Joshua MassenAuthorhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/12033131935968488175noreply@blogger.comBlogger9125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3733545996388457449.post-89703471446846358312010-02-16T08:54:14.764+00:002010-02-16T08:54:14.764+00:00Welcome to TKnC Josh. Your story unfolded really w...Welcome to TKnC Josh. Your story unfolded really well and I liked how the elderly couple, whom you would normally trust, became the villains of the piece.<br /><br />More please.Lily Childshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15861288507716873813noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3733545996388457449.post-67531370172863814512010-02-14T12:51:01.412+00:002010-02-14T12:51:01.412+00:00Hi guys, just to let you know that I'm very pl...Hi guys, just to let you know that I'm very pleased that you've decided to publish my story on this great site and I'm quite happy with all edits made.Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07456807845299767331noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3733545996388457449.post-84674953441459159932010-02-13T21:56:33.487+00:002010-02-13T21:56:33.487+00:00Cheers, Matt. I hope so. Having said that, I'v...Cheers, Matt. I hope so. Having said that, I've not heard from Josh since so maybe he thinks we're both losers! <br />Ps. That better, Sue? :)Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17913040012695421077noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3733545996388457449.post-69480580640828183052010-02-13T19:20:55.432+00:002010-02-13T19:20:55.432+00:00Hey, you two - you know what they say about self-p...Hey, you two - you know what they say about self-praise...... ;-pSueHhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11394307650434614637noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3733545996388457449.post-81385217538412682742010-02-13T19:00:10.620+00:002010-02-13T19:00:10.620+00:00I second that one about the photos Col. trying to ...I second that one about the photos Col. trying to find something appropriate, while not giving the game away is always difficult. But I'm glad we do so, I think it sets us apart from similar sites.<br /><br />Col, I read your feedback to Josh and it was great advice that will help make his writing even better. Maybe my little effort will too. Some guys us, eh?Authorhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12033131935968488175noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3733545996388457449.post-22061997386842949122010-02-13T18:25:49.096+00:002010-02-13T18:25:49.096+00:00Matt,
I'd already explained to Josh about a co...Matt,<br />I'd already explained to Josh about a couple of minor tweaks I'd made, but I obviously missed those others(!). I'm sure he'll be fine with the slight edits. I thought the story was more than good enough and I'm sure he's fine with it as I've just read on his blog how delighted he is to have joined us.<br /><br />Sue - as we've said before, sometimes the accompanying photo takes longer to sort than the actual story!Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17913040012695421077noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3733545996388457449.post-73023317050227021902010-02-13T12:38:30.125+00:002010-02-13T12:38:30.125+00:00Good fun story, Josh. Well done. I took a little l...Good fun story, Josh. Well done. I took a little liberty in editing a couple words 'bought' should be 'brought', and where we got three boughts in a row, I cut one and changed it to 'jabbed'. Hope you're OK with that. Matt.<br /><br />P.S. Also changed tea to dinner, where the cup of tea had already been mentioned a few times previously.Authorhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12033131935968488175noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3733545996388457449.post-63689527132641428472010-02-13T00:33:36.389+00:002010-02-13T00:33:36.389+00:00Josh - well done, creating a twist where the crimi...Josh - well done, creating a twist where the criminal becomes the victim! And I wonder what the pre-story contained - a crime and an accident.....! Maybe you could give us a prequel...?<br /><br />Col, I have to hand it to you and Matt - you seem to find pics tailor-made for the stories here! Bet that's a challenge at times!!SueHhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11394307650434614637noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3733545996388457449.post-15315767280710595042010-02-12T20:54:02.115+00:002010-02-12T20:54:02.115+00:00Welcome Joshua,
I know you've been chomping at...Welcome Joshua,<br />I know you've been chomping at the bit for a while now, so well done for creating an enjoyable crime-horror combo with a tasty twist!<br />Regards,<br />ColAnonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17913040012695421077noreply@blogger.com